THE LOST BAG

  One day Marco and Sophie was walking on the street,when they saw a lost bag down in the poverment.Marco opened the bag and he found the ID and the phone number of the owmer and then sophie imediatly called the lady that she had lost the bag.In the end of the day of the day they met the old lady and they gave her bag back,then the old lady gave some money to Marco and Sophie for the help of find the bag!!!


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THE LOST BAG

It's Tuesday afternoon and Maria and George after their exhausting lesson are going back home. Suddenly, they found a bag on the pavement, so they picked it up. After they opened the bag, they found the identity of the woman who had lost it ,so they decided to visit the woman's apartment to give her back her lost bag. When they finally arrived, COMMA they gave the bag to the woman. She was very happy and she thanked them from the bottom of her heart.

MY PARTY

Hi Malcolm

The next Monday I am doing having my birthday party and I would like to invite you. The party begins at 6pm and finishes at 10pm. Would you be able to come? If you do, make to sure to bring your phone with you.

Your friend,
                                                                                                                                                             Aris

The lost bag

   A sunny Saturday morning two friends,Sophie and Florence, (comma again) were going for a walk at the mall. While they were having an interesting conversation, (comma) they found a bag on the street. (full stop) They looked in the bag to see if  there was an ID card or something like that in it.Well,they found an ID card and on it was written all the information about the owner of the card was written on it. there was written the phone number of the owner was there ,too.So the two friends called here that number and they gave the bag back to the owner back.


Well done, blogger! You can copy the text and the corrections on your writing notebook so that you will remember them. Christina 💕

My party

  Hello Malcolm,
  I'm planning a party for my birthday and I would like you to come.I will have my party at my house and it will be the next Sunday(12/4). FULL STOP It starts at 5 p.m. and it finishes at 9 p.m.We will have so much fun!Would you like to come?I hope so.Also if you come, you don't have to bring anything.

 See you soon,
    Maria


Bravo Maraki! Superb KET writing! Christina 💗

A review of a book

  The title of the book is"My grandma the thief" and the writer is David Williams who is the number 1 of children's book writers in Great Britain. I chose this book because it's one of my favourite.
  The story is about a kid called Ben who is bored because he has to meet his grandma every Friday. Her T.V. is not woking and she only wants to play Scrabble. Suddenly, Ben discovered something that it changed everything.He discovered that his grandma is a world famous thief and her dream is to stole steal the "Jewelery of the crown". Then, (comma) Ben convinces his grandma to do it together.That's when the adventure starts!!!
  I will recommend it to every kid of my age because this book is very interesting, funny and exciting!!!!

What a great way to celebrate International Children's Book Day, Leo! Well done!  Christina 💘

My top tip for a holiday

   Last summer I went with family to Italy.It was amazing.We visited lots of beautiful sights like colosseum,Pompei and the two volcanoes of Aitna and Bezoubios.It was really nice but colosseum was a little bit boring.Anyway,when we arrived to Italy i realised that i forgot to take my camera with me,so i didn't take photos of the beautiful sights which we visited.So if you go on holidays with your family you must take your camera with you.

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These are the changes I am suggesting. You can compare the two versions of the text:

   Last summer I went to Italy with family to Italy.It was amazing.We visited lots of beautiful sights, COMMA  like THE Colosseum, Pompei and the two volcanoes of Aitna and Bezouvios. It was really nice, COMMA but THE Colosseum was a little bit boring. Anyway, when we arrived to Italy, COMMA I (always capital) realised that I had forgotten to take my camera with me, so I didn't take photos of the beautiful sights which we visited.So if you go on holidays with your family, COMMA you must take your camera with you.

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Romanos, you also forgot that this was supposed to be a two-paragraph text, right? In the second paragraph, you could describe an experience you had during your holidays which proves that your advice is good. Look again at the sample writing on the student's book to understand better.

Another note: GO TO+ place + with whom (there is a specific word order in English!)

I think you can rewrite the text by correcting the mistakes and adding at least one more paragraph. OK? You can do this, amazing blogger! Christina 💖

A story with 3 pictures

Μια μέρα δύο φίλοι Michael και Mary περπατούσαν στο δρόμο όταν είδαν μια τσάντα στο πάτωμα. Ήθελαν να μάθουν ποια ήταν η τσάντα. Έτσι κοίταξαν την τσάντα και ένα σημείο είδαν ένα δελτίο ταυτότητας. Αυτή η κάρτα λέει ότι η διεύθυνση έτσι οι δύο φίλοι πήγαν στην διεύθυνση που λέει. Όταν έφθασαν το έδωσαν στη γυναίκα. Η γυναίκα τους ευχαρίστησε και άφησαν το σπίτι της γυναίκας.

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Καλά κάνει John! Αυτή είναι μια μεγάλη προσπάθεια! Ακολουθούν οι προτάσεις μου για κάποιες αλλαγές:

Μια μέρα δυο φίλοι Michael και Mary περπατούσαν στο δρόμο όταν είδαν μια τσάντα στο πάτωμα. Ήθελαν να μάθουν τι ήταν η τσάντα. Έτσι, κοίταξαν την τσάντα και σε ένα σημείο είδαν ένα δελτίο ταυτότητας. ΔΙΕΥΘΥΝΣΗ ΣΕ ΙΣΤΟΡΙΑ, έτσι οι δύο φίλοι πήγαν στην ΔΙΕΥΘΥΝΣΗ. Όταν έφθασαν, το έδωσαν στη γυναίκα. Η γυναίκα τους ευχαρίστησε και έφυγαν από το σπίτι της γυναίκας ΧΑΠΛΗ. 

A friend is going to visit me this week

Hi Ermis!

I"m really happy that you're coming to visit me this weekend.I've tidied  my room, so there's plenty of space for your things and I've asked mum to make pizza for us to eat on the night/ day you arrive.I've asked dad to make donuts too because I know is they are your favourite.We're going cycling on Saturday afternoon because it's going to be very sunny  this weekend. Why don't you bring your laptop to play in our free time and  for on Saturday afternoon, don't worry, you will take my old bike it's which is very good for rides!Let's go into town on Saturday evening.We can go to a new internet café!

See you soon,
Leonidas

Excellent work Leo! Be a little more careful with IN and ON so that your email is absolutely perfect! Well done once again! Christina 🥳🔝👏🌹

A Friday evening: KET Writing

One Friday evening two friends, Mitchell and Helen were walking down the street (no comma here) when suddenly they saw a bag on the floor. They wanted to find out who it belonged to, so they searched it. At some point, they found a purse and inside there was an identification card. So they checked the address and when they found the house, they gave it to the woman that had lost it. She thanked them and then the two kids/children left.
                                                         

THE END

Wow! Well done, blogger George! Excellent piece of writing! 💪
Christina 

A story with 3 pictures

One day Marco and Sophie was walking on the street,when they saw a lost bag down in the pavement.Marrco opened the bag and he found the ID and the phone number of the owner of the bag and then Sophie immediately called the owner and she was an old lady.Many hours later the two kids met thhe old lady and they gave the bag to the first owner,then the old lady gve some money to Marco and Sophie for the help of find the bag!


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Hello Leo! That was a very good attempt at KET writing. Here are some corrections and ways of improvement:

One day Marco and Sophie was were walking in the street (no comma) when they saw a lost bag down in on the pavement. Marco opened the bag and he found the ID and the phone number of the owner of the bag. (full stop) and Then, (comma) Sophie immediately called the owner and she who was an old lady. Many hours later the two kids met the old lady and they gave the bag to her the first owne Then, the old lady gave some money to Marco and Sophie for their help in finding the bag!


We can discuss the corrections in class, as well. Keep blogging in English! :-)

Christina 👏

My party

From : Leo
To : Malcolm

Hi Malcolm, how are you? (you can change paragraph here)

I hope that you are fine. I want (or: I would like to) to ask you if you want to come to my party next Saturday at my aunt's restaurant! So if you want to come, the only thing that you have to bring is your happiness (or: your smile/ your good mood) because we will have a lot of fun!!!

I look farward to hear look forward to hearing from you soon/ I can't wait to see you!

Bye,
Leo (always write your first name here)


Well done, blogger! Check out the corrections and let me know if they are clear. 

Christina 💙

My top tip for hoidays!!

      Last summer I went on holiday to Naxos. This island is very beautiful.We had great a time there with my family. Naxos has beaches with crystal clear water and a lot of parks.We ate in fantastic restaurants.
       The only bad thing we came across was the road from the port to the hotel.This road was very weird and had a lot of strange bends.
       My top holiday tip is to take a lot of  PHOTOS, because you must have a lot of memories when you are an adult.

My top tip for a happy holiday

 My parents love going to museums.When we travel somewhere they always want to go to as many museums as possible.Yawn! And the most annoying thing is that they gaze at the exhibits for hours and it takes ages for us to leave.
 Two years ago we went to Budapest on holiday.My parents took me to EVERY museum in the city town. It was so boring that I wanted to go back home.It was so unbelievably tedious that in the end I was mad at them.
 So last year, when we traveled to Edinburgh, I had a brilliant idea. I took my earphones with me.While my parents were gazing at the exhibits I just listened to music. We went to loads more museums, but I had my earphones so it wasn't that boring. On the whole, our holidays were brilliant. So if your parents are keen on visiting museums, I would recommend you take your earphones if you have any.

My TOP tip for a happy holiday

Last summer I went to Chania with my family.We had great time.We went to a lots of beaches, we visited the center of Chania and we walked down the Samaria Gorge.
My holiday tip is to take plenty of sun cream with you. One day we went to a beach near Chania. Our sun cream ran out, we didn't have any more and the supermarkets were closed.When we got back to the hotel my sister was burnt and she couldn't sleep.
So what do you think of my tip? Let me know in the comments.

My top tip(s) for holiday

   Last year I went to Thessaloniki. I had a great time there.The famous White Tower and the statue of Alexander the Great are there. I went with my parents, my godmother and my godfather. We went for walks every single day.
     The only problem was that it was very cold there, and my dad caught a cold because he didn't wear warm clothes as he should have! My dad usually wears T-shirts and jackets because he doesn't  like T-shirts with long sleeves, but when it's cold we should always wear warm clothes.
     Also another tip is not to let your parents embarrass you.Three years ago, my sister, my mum, my grandmother and I went to a place on Crete called Elounda. At the hotel they arranged an event  to entertain us. All of us went there with some friends we met. During the event there was a game in which we had to find the names of some songs, so we took part in it. But during the game my dad phoned my mum, and my mum told him that we were playing a game in an event, and she also told him that she had to download an app called Shazam and everyone at the event heard it because she was speaking so loud on the phone.I felt so embarrassed. My advice would be to ask your parents not to have long phone conversations in front of others.

These are two of my top tips hope you liked them.See you next time, bye!!!
 

An opinion essay

ΜΥ TOP TIPS FOR A GOOD HOLIDAY

Last summer I went to Kythera with my grandma, to meet my aunt and her daughter, my other aunt! The trip was brilliant, but one problem ruined our fun.
My younger aunt, some of her cousins and I were playing a very competitive card game called xeri, and we got really excited about it. We were arguing for hours until I had a very good idea! I thought that we could play an other game named YU-GI-OH instead. My top holiday tip is not to play competitive games like xeri -  it's better to play something more relaxing like Monopoly or go for a walk or a meal!
So what do you think of my tip? You can tell me in the comments.
BYE!!!!

TOP TIPS FOR A HAPPY HOLIDAY

  Last year I went to Athens with my parents and my older brother. It was great, but there was one problem that nearly ruined our fun. My family went to play basketball and, as always, my brother and I were very competitive.We started fighting right from the outset, until we got bored and left the court.
  That's when I had my bright idea for a better holiday.So what's my tip? You don't  have to play competitive sports with your family. If you want to have fun with them, you could go to a museum or to a nice restaurant so that you can enjoy yourself and  have a good time without arguing at all.
What do you think of this idea? Let me know in the comments below.

My favourite book

My favourite book is <<The adventures of Sherlock Holms>>.The writter is Arthur Conan Ntoil.The book contains 6 mysterious story's:The organization of redheads,A recognition case,The mystery of the boscomb valley,The mysterious beggar,The engineer's finger and the polite bachelor
My favourite story is <<The organization of redheads>>.It's funny story but also is interesting.It's an organization only from redheads that they want to kill Sherlock Holms.So Sherlock Holms with his friend Watson they want to find why the organnization  want to kill Sherlock.
It's a very interesting book and I would recommend you to read this book