After the ship crashed, Jenny went to her grandfather's house and asked him what they had to do. The other day many people were on the beach and were waiting for emergency services to do something. One time Jenny saw a woman to the golden cliffs. She had a camera. She shouted to her grandfather to see her and her grandfather didn't say anything. She left at the beach and she went to her grandfather's house. She wrote a note which it was saying that she went to the golden cliffs. When she arrived to the golden cliffs, she saw the woman who was talking to her phone with her friend Guy. They would go to the shipwreck where the shark rock was and get the uranium.
I like both your posts Paul, but you should be more careful with grammar, right?
ReplyDelete