THE LOST BAG

  One day Marco and Sophie was walking on the street,when they saw a lost bag down in the poverment.Marco opened the bag and he found the ID and the phone number of the owmer and then sophie imediatly called the lady that she had lost the bag.In the end of the day of the day they met the old lady and they gave her bag back,then the old lady gave some money to Marco and Sophie for the help of find the bag!!!


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THE LOST BAG

It's Tuesday afternoon and Maria and George after their exhausting lesson are going back home. Suddenly, they found a bag on the pavement, so they picked it up. After they opened the bag, they found the identity of the woman who had lost it ,so they decided to visit the woman's apartment to give her back her lost bag. When they finally arrived, COMMA they gave the bag to the woman. She was very happy and she thanked them from the bottom of her heart.

MY PARTY

Hi Malcolm

The next Monday I am doing having my birthday party and I would like to invite you. The party begins at 6pm and finishes at 10pm. Would you be able to come? If you do, make to sure to bring your phone with you.

Your friend,
                                                                                                                                                             Aris

The lost bag

   A sunny Saturday morning two friends,Sophie and Florence, (comma again) were going for a walk at the mall. While they were having an interesting conversation, (comma) they found a bag on the street. (full stop) They looked in the bag to see if  there was an ID card or something like that in it.Well,they found an ID card and on it was written all the information about the owner of the card was written on it. there was written the phone number of the owner was there ,too.So the two friends called here that number and they gave the bag back to the owner back.


Well done, blogger! You can copy the text and the corrections on your writing notebook so that you will remember them. Christina 💕

My party

  Hello Malcolm,
  I'm planning a party for my birthday and I would like you to come.I will have my party at my house and it will be the next Sunday(12/4). FULL STOP It starts at 5 p.m. and it finishes at 9 p.m.We will have so much fun!Would you like to come?I hope so.Also if you come, you don't have to bring anything.

 See you soon,
    Maria


Bravo Maraki! Superb KET writing! Christina 💗

A review of a book

  The title of the book is"My grandma the thief" and the writer is David Williams who is the number 1 of children's book writers in Great Britain. I chose this book because it's one of my favourite.
  The story is about a kid called Ben who is bored because he has to meet his grandma every Friday. Her T.V. is not woking and she only wants to play Scrabble. Suddenly, Ben discovered something that it changed everything.He discovered that his grandma is a world famous thief and her dream is to stole steal the "Jewelery of the crown". Then, (comma) Ben convinces his grandma to do it together.That's when the adventure starts!!!
  I will recommend it to every kid of my age because this book is very interesting, funny and exciting!!!!

What a great way to celebrate International Children's Book Day, Leo! Well done!  Christina 💘