Saturday, April 4, 2020

The lost bag

   A sunny Saturday morning two friends,Sophie and Florence, (comma again) were going for a walk at the mall. While they were having an interesting conversation, (comma) they found a bag on the street. (full stop) They looked in the bag to see if  there was an ID card or something like that in it.Well,they found an ID card and on it was written all the information about the owner of the card was written on it. there was written the phone number of the owner was there ,too.So the two friends called here that number and they gave the bag back to the owner back.

Well done, blogger! You can copy the text and the corrections on your writing notebook so that you will remember them. Christina 💕

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