Friday, March 25, 2016

Haiku Poem

                                                                      Walk by the sea
                                                                      See the sea birds,which fly
                                                                      Summer is the best

1 comment:

  1. Hello fantastic blogger and poet! Your poem is great, but there is one small problem: You need one more syllable in line one and two. Then, it'll be perfect! Can you think of any ideas of how to change the syllables?