My top tip for a holiday

   Last summer I went with family to Italy.It was amazing.We visited lots of beautiful sights like colosseum,Pompei and the two volcanoes of Aitna and Bezoubios.It was really nice but colosseum was a little bit boring.Anyway,when we arrived to Italy i realised that i forgot to take my camera with me,so i didn't take photos of the beautiful sights which we visited.So if you go on holidays with your family you must take your camera with you.

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These are the changes I am suggesting. You can compare the two versions of the text:

   Last summer I went to Italy with family to Italy.It was amazing.We visited lots of beautiful sights, COMMA  like THE Colosseum, Pompei and the two volcanoes of Aitna and Bezouvios. It was really nice, COMMA but THE Colosseum was a little bit boring. Anyway, when we arrived to Italy, COMMA I (always capital) realised that I had forgotten to take my camera with me, so I didn't take photos of the beautiful sights which we visited.So if you go on holidays with your family, COMMA you must take your camera with you.

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Romanos, you also forgot that this was supposed to be a two-paragraph text, right? In the second paragraph, you could describe an experience you had during your holidays which proves that your advice is good. Look again at the sample writing on the student's book to understand better.

Another note: GO TO+ place + with whom (there is a specific word order in English!)

I think you can rewrite the text by correcting the mistakes and adding at least one more paragraph. OK? You can do this, amazing blogger! Christina 💖

A story with 3 pictures

Μια μέρα δύο φίλοι Michael και Mary περπατούσαν στο δρόμο όταν είδαν μια τσάντα στο πάτωμα. Ήθελαν να μάθουν ποια ήταν η τσάντα. Έτσι κοίταξαν την τσάντα και ένα σημείο είδαν ένα δελτίο ταυτότητας. Αυτή η κάρτα λέει ότι η διεύθυνση έτσι οι δύο φίλοι πήγαν στην διεύθυνση που λέει. Όταν έφθασαν το έδωσαν στη γυναίκα. Η γυναίκα τους ευχαρίστησε και άφησαν το σπίτι της γυναίκας.

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Καλά κάνει John! Αυτή είναι μια μεγάλη προσπάθεια! Ακολουθούν οι προτάσεις μου για κάποιες αλλαγές:

Μια μέρα δυο φίλοι Michael και Mary περπατούσαν στο δρόμο όταν είδαν μια τσάντα στο πάτωμα. Ήθελαν να μάθουν τι ήταν η τσάντα. Έτσι, κοίταξαν την τσάντα και σε ένα σημείο είδαν ένα δελτίο ταυτότητας. ΔΙΕΥΘΥΝΣΗ ΣΕ ΙΣΤΟΡΙΑ, έτσι οι δύο φίλοι πήγαν στην ΔΙΕΥΘΥΝΣΗ. Όταν έφθασαν, το έδωσαν στη γυναίκα. Η γυναίκα τους ευχαρίστησε και έφυγαν από το σπίτι της γυναίκας ΧΑΠΛΗ. 

A friend is going to visit me this week

Hi Ermis!

I"m really happy that you're coming to visit me this weekend.I've tidied  my room, so there's plenty of space for your things and I've asked mum to make pizza for us to eat on the night/ day you arrive.I've asked dad to make donuts too because I know is they are your favourite.We're going cycling on Saturday afternoon because it's going to be very sunny  this weekend. Why don't you bring your laptop to play in our free time and  for on Saturday afternoon, don't worry, you will take my old bike it's which is very good for rides!Let's go into town on Saturday evening.We can go to a new internet café!

See you soon,
Leonidas

Excellent work Leo! Be a little more careful with IN and ON so that your email is absolutely perfect! Well done once again! Christina 🥳🔝👏🌹

A Friday evening: KET Writing

One Friday evening two friends, Mitchell and Helen were walking down the street (no comma here) when suddenly they saw a bag on the floor. They wanted to find out who it belonged to, so they searched it. At some point, they found a purse and inside there was an identification card. So they checked the address and when they found the house, they gave it to the woman that had lost it. She thanked them and then the two kids/children left.
                                                         

THE END

Wow! Well done, blogger George! Excellent piece of writing! 💪
Christina 

Time to revise!

ΟΙ ΠΡΟΤΑΣΕΙΣ ΜΑΣ ΓΙΑ ΕΠΑΝΑΛΗΨΗ ΚΑΙ ΕΞΑΣΚΗΣΗ ΑΠΟ ΤΟ ΣΠΙΤΙ ΓΙΑ ΟΛΕΣ ΤΙΣ ΗΛΙΚΙΕΣ ΚΑΙ ΓΛΩΣΣΙΚΑ ΕΠΙΠΕΔΑ


Important news:

ΕΝΗΜΕΡΩΣΕΙΣ ΓΙΑ ΤΟΥΣ ΜΑΘΗΤΕΣ ΜΑΣ ΜΕΤΑ ΤΟ ΥΠΟΧΡΕΩΤΙΚΟ ΚΛΕΙΣΙΜΟ ΤΟΥ ΚΕΝΤΡΟΥ ΜΑΣ

ΟΔΗΓΙΕΣ ΠΡΟΣΤΑΣΙΑΣ ΚΑΤΑ ΤΟΥ ΙΟΥ ΚΑΙ ΔΡΑΣΤΗΡΙΟΤΗΤΕΣ ΓΙΑ ΤΟ ΣΠΙΤΙ

A story with 3 pictures

One day Marco and Sophie was walking on the street,when they saw a lost bag down in the pavement.Marrco opened the bag and he found the ID and the phone number of the owner of the bag and then Sophie immediately called the owner and she was an old lady.Many hours later the two kids met thhe old lady and they gave the bag to the first owner,then the old lady gve some money to Marco and Sophie for the help of find the bag!


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Hello Leo! That was a very good attempt at KET writing. Here are some corrections and ways of improvement:

One day Marco and Sophie was were walking in the street (no comma) when they saw a lost bag down in on the pavement. Marco opened the bag and he found the ID and the phone number of the owner of the bag. (full stop) and Then, (comma) Sophie immediately called the owner and she who was an old lady. Many hours later the two kids met the old lady and they gave the bag to her the first owne Then, the old lady gave some money to Marco and Sophie for their help in finding the bag!


We can discuss the corrections in class, as well. Keep blogging in English! :-)

Christina 👏

My party

From : Leo
To : Malcolm

Hi Malcolm, how are you? (you can change paragraph here)

I hope that you are fine. I want (or: I would like to) to ask you if you want to come to my party next Saturday at my aunt's restaurant! So if you want to come, the only thing that you have to bring is your happiness (or: your smile/ your good mood) because we will have a lot of fun!!!

I look farward to hear look forward to hearing from you soon/ I can't wait to see you!

Bye,
Leo (always write your first name here)


Well done, blogger! Check out the corrections and let me know if they are clear. 

Christina 💙