One Friday evening two friends, Mitchell and Helen were walking down the street (no comma here) when suddenly they saw a bag on the floor. They wanted to find out who it belonged to, so they searched it. At some point, they found a purse and inside there was an identification card. So they checked the address and when they found the house, they gave it to the woman that had lost it. She thanked them and then the two kids/children left.
Wow! Well done, blogger George! Excellent piece of writing! 💪