A story with 3 pictures

One day Marco and Sophie was walking on the street,when they saw a lost bag down in the pavement.Marrco opened the bag and he found the ID and the phone number of the owner of the bag and then Sophie immediately called the owner and she was an old lady.Many hours later the two kids met thhe old lady and they gave the bag to the first owner,then the old lady gve some money to Marco and Sophie for the help of find the bag!


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Hello Leo! That was a very good attempt at KET writing. Here are some corrections and ways of improvement:

One day Marco and Sophie was were walking in the street (no comma) when they saw a lost bag down in on the pavement. Marco opened the bag and he found the ID and the phone number of the owner of the bag. (full stop) and Then, (comma) Sophie immediately called the owner and she who was an old lady. Many hours later the two kids met the old lady and they gave the bag to her the first owne Then, the old lady gave some money to Marco and Sophie for their help in finding the bag!


We can discuss the corrections in class, as well. Keep blogging in English! :-)

Christina 👏