Dear Ms Ruby,
I saw your advert in a magazine yesterday.I wonder if you could answer some questions.
Firstly, what date does the course begin on and how many weeks is the course?I would like to know because I'm going to travel abroad in summer.Also can we take interviews from fashion designers?Is it necessary to have an interview? Moreover, you don't refer to how much the lessons cost. Can we pay by cash or and by credit card?
Finally, you say that our future could be in your hands.Does that mean that you will help the students to find a job?
I look forward to receiving more information from you in order to call you and see the details.
Yours sincerely,
Konstantina Miminou
I saw your advert in a magazine yesterday.I wonder if you could answer some questions.
Firstly, what date does the course begin on and how many weeks is the course?I would like to know because I'm going to travel abroad in summer.Also can we take interviews from fashion designers?Is it necessary to have an interview? Moreover, you don't refer to how much the lessons cost. Can we pay by cash or and by credit card?
Finally, you say that our future could be in your hands.Does that mean that you will help the students to find a job?
I look forward to receiving more information from you in order to call you and see the details.
Yours sincerely,
Konstantina Miminou
Bravo Konstantina! I made just a few corrections. :-)
ReplyDeleteThank you very much!!
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