Tuesday, October 18, 2016

Danger at shark rock

   The story start when Jenny McDonald who live on Manchester,a city in the north of England and she go to the last day before holidays.She is so exited because she will go to France.But her parents can'take go because her brother break his leg.One day she read a letter which was from her grandfather and it say that he want to come on his home,in Kirk island,in Scotland. After a week she went to Scotland by a train to the west coast and with a boat to the Kirk island.When she arrived there she went to her grandfather's home.She went on the beach and she saw a rock like a shark.She see Alex who help her grandfather and she leaved from the beach to grandfather's house.When they arrived there,they eat and went to sleep.

1 comment:

  1. OK Paul, but remember to use the PAST SIMPLE in all the summary. Can you correct some verbs, please?