Sunday, October 26, 2014

Writing letter to Mrs Jackson about the babysitting group

Dear Mrs Jackson,
  Thank you for your letter.It was lovely to hear from you.
  I 'd love to help the babysitting club.I'm quite confident and responsible with young children i get on with them.Also i have some great ideas.I think that young children like drawing and playing with their toys.So, I will find more toys from my sister and i will give to them.
  I prefer to do it with my best friend Hara, because she is very responsible and mature.She loves young children and she often babysits for her neighbours.
  I'm really looking foward to next Saturday.
  Best Wishes

1 comment:

  1. Well done to the girls' team!!! But do you remember that I is always capital when it is a petsonal pronoun?
    e.g. I inform you that I am always responsible.