A letter to the editor of a newspaper

Dear Editor,

  I recently read an article in your newspaper by Georgia Brown with the title "Stop the pop".I would like to disagree.
  To begin with,there are a lot of groups that are talented,such as "Onirama".Thet are amazing musicians and an excellent band.Also they give live concerts and they write thought-provoking lyrics.
  Secondly,there are also a lot of pop stars that are creative,such as Taylor Swift.She has an exciting,relaxing music and she is creative.She takes risk with new styles of music,too.
   In conclusion,I would like to say that there are a lot of creative and hard-working pop singers.Music is relaxing and important to our life.

Yours faithfully,

Eva Chrisostomaki