Tuesday, July 30, 2013

Hotel Transylvania

               
       If I could visit< Hotel Transylvania> and the monsters was behave me so good as Jonathan I would        
     keep their secret .However,I think that people if know the secret of the monsters they don't touch a hair 
     of the monsters.Nevertheless,if the monsters didn't want their secret to be known ,I wouldn't betray them.

1 comment:

  1. Good try, George, but here you can see some changes I have made:

    If I could visit 'Hotel Transylvania' and the monsters behaved to me as well as they did to Jonathan, I would keep their secret .However,I think that even if people knew the secret of the monsters, they wouldn't touch a hair of the monsters. Nevertheless,if the monsters didn't want their secret to be known ,I wouldn't betray them.

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